[No QA] Update Personal-Cards.md for R2 broken connections#87058
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Add sections covering broken personal card connections: why connections break, how to fix them (Fix card / Update card), Concierge DM notification, RBR indicator, and the broken connection violation on receipt-scanned cash expenses. Co-authored-by: Stephanie Elliott <stephanieelliott@users.noreply.github.com>
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| keywords: [personal cards, Wallet, reimbursable, credit card import, Expensify Classic, New Expensify, assigned cards, card details] | ||
| internalScope: Audience is members with personal credit cards already connected to their account. Covers viewing and managing existing personal cards in the Wallet, including reimbursable settings. Does not cover adding new personal cards or company card programs. | ||
| description: Learn how to view, manage, and fix broken connections for personal credit cards in New Expensify. | ||
| keywords: [New Expensify, personal cards, Wallet, reimbursable, credit card import, Expensify Classic, New Expensify, assigned cards, card details, broken connection, fix card] |
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| keywords: [New Expensify, personal cards, Wallet, reimbursable, credit card import, Expensify Classic, New Expensify, assigned cards, card details, broken connection, fix card] | |
| keywords: [New Expensify, personal cards, Wallet, reimbursable, credit card import, Expensify Classic, assigned cards, card details, broken connection, fix card] |
| - A red dot indicator on **Wallet** in the navigation tabs. | ||
| - A red dot indicator on the card in **Wallet** leading to the error. | ||
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| ## How to fix a broken personal card connection | ||
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| 1. In the navigation tabs (on the left on web, on the bottom on mobile) navigate to **Account > Wallet**. |
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Navigation phrasing inconsistency: This step uses "In the navigation tabs... navigate to" while other steps in this article (lines 24 and 50) use "Click the navigation tabs... then select". Per HELPSITE_NAMING_CONVENTIONS.md, use the standard unified phrasing consistently throughout the article. Also, "navigate to" is a prohibited vague navigation phrase.
| 1. In the navigation tabs (on the left on web, on the bottom on mobile) navigate to **Account > Wallet**. | |
| 1. Click the navigation tabs (on the left on web, on the bottom on mobile), then select **Account > Wallet**. |
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| 1. In the navigation tabs (on the left on web, on the bottom on mobile) navigate to **Account > Wallet**. | ||
| 2. Under **Assigned cards**, select the card with the broken connection. | ||
| 3. Choose **Fix card**. |
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Naming and style: "Choose" is not a standard action verb used in Expensify HelpDot articles. Use "Click", "Tap", or "Select" to match UI interaction conventions and maintain consistency with the rest of the article.
| 3. Choose **Fix card**. | |
| 3. Select **Fix card**. |
| 3. Choose **Fix card**. | ||
| 4. Log into your bank when prompted to re-authenticate the connection. | ||
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| If logging into your bank doesn't resolve the issue, tap **Update card** to attempt a manual refresh. |
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Naming and style: "tap" should be capitalized as "Tap" or changed to "select" for consistency. More importantly, this mixes platform-specific language ("tap" implies mobile) without qualification. Since the article addresses both web and mobile, consider using "select" or "click" which are more platform-neutral, or specify the platform.
| If logging into your bank doesn't resolve the issue, tap **Update card** to attempt a manual refresh. | |
| If logging into your bank doesn't resolve the issue, select **Update card** to attempt a manual refresh. |
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| To resolve the violation, fix the broken card connection by following the steps above. The violation is automatically removed from affected expenses once the connection is restored. | ||
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| You can tap the hyperlinked text in the violation to go directly to the **Card details** page in **Wallet** where you can fix the connection. |
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Naming and style: Same issue as above -- "tap" implies mobile only. Since this article covers both web and mobile, use a platform-neutral verb like "click" or "select".
| You can tap the hyperlinked text in the violation to go directly to the **Card details** page in **Wallet** where you can fix the connection. | |
| You can click the hyperlinked text in the violation to go directly to the **Card details** page in **Wallet** where you can fix the connection. |
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| - Logging into your bank successfully re-authenticates the connection. | ||
| - Tapping Update card successfully refreshes the card. | ||
| - Expensify's daily automatic card refresh succeeds. |
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Naming and style: "Update card" is a UI button label and should be bolded per HELPSITE_NAMING_CONVENTIONS.md button naming standards.
| - Expensify's daily automatic card refresh succeeds. | |
| - Tapping **Update card** successfully refreshes the card. |
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LGTM. @stephanieelliott are the bot review items something you want actioned before I merge this?
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@joekaufmanexpensify oh shoot yea I forgot those. They're all minor internal style things -- I'll merge this now to get the content out there, then will follow up with another PR to make those edits. |
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Summary
Updates the existing
Personal-Cards.mdhelp article for Release 2 of the personal card import project (Expensify/Expensify#574406).Added sections:
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Personal-Cards.mdrenders correctly on HelpDot stagingcc @stephanieelliott